Random :)

The weather's getting colder!
It's snowing in Iowa City tomorrow! As the weather gets colder and
colder everyday, I think about the summer of 2010. It is so weird, because
it seems like only a month ago! It's amazing how fast the time flies.
I hope all of you are having fun at school. I am, too, except I get so much
homework. Ah, now I need to do American History and Physical Science. I
just finished English, which almost took me an hour.

I just wanted to write on my blog just to see how everyone's doing!


P.S - Christmas is coming soon!

Hi everyone!

It's a wonderful Friday afternoon, and I had a sudden urge
to write on this blog! :)
Everyone is busy with their own things.. School, after school activities, homework, tests, etc.
In fact, I was busy, too. I can't believe how fast the time flies! It seems like Monday was just yesterday, and it's Friday already!
I hope everyone is having fun through their school year!
Tonight, I will be with the pep band playing at the football game (I play the flute).
It's going to be so much fun! :)
Right now, I'm drawing and pretty much chilling out.
Haha, I know, this blog post doesn't have anything important. :D
I hope nobody wasted any time!!
I just wanted to know if everyone is all having fun!!

I can't believe Cy-tag is over.

Right now, I'm in my room, listening to music.
I still can't believe Exploring New Worlds Through Writing is over. I had
a wonderful time with Sarah, Lea, Greg, Shelby, and Mr. Kelly.
It was the best summer I had. I wish all of you guys a happy remaining summer!

We're on the same Page :)

Yejoon and I are finally on the same page now (I read ahead so now I'm beating her;) Also I (Sarah) am kinda writing this cause Yejoon logged in. But....
Here is what happened.

- Eragon's egg hatched; it was a dragon! (shocking;)
-Two strangers come to town to look for the egg. Ohhhhhh....
- Roran leaves town to work and asks his father if he can marry Katrina (yes! <3)
-Brom tells Eragon about the origin of his name and other stories; helps Eragon gain info about his dragon.
- Names dragon Saphira :)

Morning of July 26th

I was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo tired this morning. I felt like I was going to fall.
I couldn't even walk. Something that we all did this morning woke me
up (now I'm not tired at all). Yay! :D
Us, writing class, all went to the virtual reality. It was a fun experience.
I loved the virtual reality universe! It felt like it was real and I felt like I
was in a different world! And those demos were so cool!! It was so awesome how
I could hold the object in the screen with my own fingers!
It was my once in my life awesome experience.
I would never forget this awesome experience that we had in the morning.
It was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

My Story Peer Edit

Shelby and Lea peer edited my story. They told me what to do to make my story sound better.
I didn't realize it until Shelby told me I used too much "how's". Lea told me how to make the story better. They both gave me awesome name suggestions.
It was a fun experience to get feed backs from other people.

=)

Right after editing Shelby's story

I absolutely loved Shelby's story. I liked her story because she didn't
directly said info right away. It felt like reading Eragon. I kept wanting
to read more to find out what it really was. The last paragraph, especially the last
sentence, was very shocking. At first her story was emotional but then later on
it was action-packed. I loved the change in the story.

Right after editing Lea's story

I absolutely loved it. It was so action packed and R. Andrew is so cute!
I had chance to experience Lea's writing style. Of course, it was different
from Sarah's. I guess each of everyone has unique and different writing styles.
Today's peer editing was easier than the last time (I guess I'm used to it now)
I loved giving feedbacks to Lea.
I'm having so much fun right now.

Yejoon's 2nd peer-editing (What's going to happen)

I am just about to start peer-editing. I'm so excited to read other people's stories.
I'm ready to be a good editor. I hope we have a great peer editing time.
I love giving and getting feedbacks. It will be so fun.

Universe's Got Talent

Hello, people! :)
I'm Zach!
I'm super excited to be here and oh yeah, I wanted to be selected as the most
interesting person in the universe.
I love living simply. Oh, and I'm very smart. I am like the smartest person in the universe.
My most important value is tranquility. I love how I'm so calm. I don't like being disturbed (So don't disturb me, okay?)
Oh intensity....... I love everything to be intense! I love people's actions and relationships to be intense! Is that a bad thing?
Probably you wouldn't believe this but I'm really a billionaire. Guess how many houses I have. I own nine hundred houses. Guess how got all these money? Because I'm a smart person! Absolutely true.
I don't have sense of smell. I think everything stinks.
I don't like apprentice that I have at work. He's so annoying. He like doesn't know how to do anything! He's so stupid. I hope he's watching this right now. Hey, you stupid head! Haha. I love insulting people.
I love modern things. I like modernized world! :D

well, that was me.
I hope I get selected!

About Myself- YEJOON

Hi everyone! I'm Yejoon.
I will tell you about myself right now. So exciting! :D

First of all, I love free stuff. I'm serious. I mean, who doesn't like free stuff? I always get really happy when I get free things.
I want to be on the top at school all the time. I get serious burnouts when I do really bad on the test. One time, I seriously cried because I did really bad on the math test. (test was easy but I forgot to answer four questions and each question had two points. Yes, It was bad. I know. I know.) :( Sad face. Where's the corner?
I don't really like the word compostable. I'm not really a plant person. Gosh, I don't like flowers. I don't like the smell (People think it's kind of weird. Do you think it's weird that I don't like flowers?)
I like the word dominant. I love important things! I love to be dominant.
I'm not a sailor person. I don't like sailing. I don't even like canoeing. How could I become a sailor if I don't even like canoeing?
I loved to read comic books when I was younger, but then I stopped reading it to read other books. I'm fine with that.
I love the word protecting. I feel safe when someone is protecting me. Sometimes, it gets a little annoying with my brother's over protection on me.
I love my mother. I can always feel her love. :) Happy face.
I want to become a psychiatrist. Just about a year ago, I really wanted to become a professional flute player. I decided not to become one. I mean, I can still play flute during my free time,
right?

Well, that was all about me! It's 100% true so don't have doubts! :D
Bye!

Collision of Two Worlds

Thousands of years ago, the two worlds' leaders had a bad relationship. They almost had a war but fortunately Charlie's World leader, Mr. Charlie Happyland, said no. Sighing, the other world's leader, Kaka, had to sign the peace treaty.
During those thousands of years, a lot of things had changed in these two worlds. While Kaka's world was going toward dictatorship, Charlie's world was going toward republic. While creatures living in Kaka's world was dying of hunger, creatures in Charlie's world was living prosperously.
Kaka still didn't know why their world didn't improve and Charlie's world did. He got very jealous. He remembered the peace treaty but he wanted have a better life himself, not his citizens, so he declared a war against Charlie's peaceful world. He wanted to take over Charlie's world and live in it all by himself. He wanted to be alone from his citizens. He didn't care about them at all.
He collected all of his citizens for the army to fight Charlie's world. Immediately after landing on Charlie's world, a huge army ran and killed peaceful living creatures. Mr. Happyland, who got an emergency call, immediately came out of his room after he heard the screaming and bombing noises.
"What is going on!" He shouted.
Nobody seemed to hear him. Kaka's army was so busy killing innocent creatures and Mr. Happyland's citizens were dying. It seemed to him that they were trying to take their world over.
He had his plan. He ran into his building and looked for his secret weapon.



*I don't have any more time. I will soon finish this story later when I have time.
Be excited! :)

Charlie's World (Second World)

Jul 23rd, 2010
"Charlie's World"


Charlie's world is so peaceful. No worries, no wars. Everything is peaceful. People respect each

other all the time. There are houses and other recreation buildings.

Another name for this world is "World of Happiness". There is no crime.

Their leader is a man named Charlie Happyland. When it was decided that he was going to be

their leader, Mr. Happyland promised to himself that he was going to make the world a world of

happiness.

No one ever dares to try to invade Charlie's World. Even though they don't have any "bad"

powers, their world has power of happiness and peace. It made other worlds realize that having

a "bad" power was nothing.

Yejoon's First World

Jul 23rd, 2010
"Yejoon's First World"

Thousands of years ago, the new world was created. Creatures from the close planets gathered all together and decided to make one big world. Oh, and the creatures were very intelligent! They knew how to take care of themselves. Like Earth's animal world, big got small. They preyed the smaller creatures. In their world, every single thing was living. Oh, even the buildings. You have been probably wondering who their leader was. Their leader was Kaka, a giant blue bird who always liked being bossy. He would always flip his wings and control people.

What peer-editing Sarah's story taught me.

Last week :D :D :D :D
I peer-edited Sarah's awesome story 1.
I actually learned a lot of things from reading her story!
It was actually my first time ever peer-editing other person's story (seriously).
From peer-editing Sarah's work, I learned about different writing styles.
I realized that my writing style was a lot different from Sarah and that each people have
different (their own) styles.
It was an awesome experience! :D :D :D
It was so fun peer-editing her work. It was very enjoyable.
I can't wait for next time to peer-edit!


P.S - well,
my blog is short again!

Hi everyone!

Hi everyone!
I'm Yejoon :)
It will be fun to comment on each others' blogs.

Well, that was my short introductory post.

Bye! :D